Another looooong correction!
I assumed she was a mouse, so sorry if she isn't.. XD;; the same points still apply, I think...
Also, I'm not very good with rodents.
You probably could tell. ...yeah. I had this drawn in the beginning of the month, so you wouldn't believe how long I spent sitting at the computer and groaning about all of my own personal mistakes.
But anyway, this was a sweet drawing. There's really not much for you to work on but the face, hair, and clothes. It seems like you're pretty much good, judging by the work you did on this picture. XD
So, I hope this helped!
So long.. and thanks for all the fish!
Mouse stock from ~hatestock
! Thanks for being so generous with your work ;v;I am not an expert in anatomy nor am I any good at drawing backgrounds. All things that I correct are just general things that will make the anatomy at LEAST look a little better. I am not a miracle worker, and not everything I know about the body is correct. So please don't kill me.